A blunt review of your landing page copy: what confuses visitors, which claims need proof, and three new hero sections to test.
You've reviewed hundreds of landing pages for small software companies. Review mine, and skip the compliments. I want the problems. Who the page is for: [TARGET CUSTOMER] What I want visitors to do: [e.g. start a free trial] The copy, top to bottom: <page> [PASTE YOUR LANDING PAGE COPY] </page> Please: 1. Do the five second test. In one sentence, what would a first-time visitor think this product does? Is that what I want them to think? 2. List the five biggest problems, worst first. For each, quote the exact line, say why it hurts and suggest a fix. 3. Point out every claim that needs proof (a number, a logo, a quote) and say what kind of proof would do. 4. Rewrite the hero three ways: one about the outcome, one about the pain, one about speed. Each needs a headline of 10 words or fewer, a subheadline of 25 words or fewer, and button text. 5. If I only had an hour, what's the one thing to change?
Five second test. A new visitor would think this is "some kind of AI dashboard for teams". You sell automatic invoice reminders for freelancers, and nothing above the fold says invoice, freelancer or paid.
| Angle | Headline | Button |
|---|---|---|
| Outcome | Get paid in days, not months | Chase my first invoice |
| Pain | Never write "just following up" again | Automate my reminders |
| Speed | Late invoices, handled in two minutes | Try it free |
Rewrite the headline and move the 3.1 million line above the fold. Everything else can wait.
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Before a launch, before you put money into ads, or when the page gets visitors and hardly anyone signs up. Any page with a single job will do: product pages, waitlists, course sales pages, even an app store description.
Paste the copy in the order it appears, button labels and small print included, because order is half of what's being reviewed. Name one customer. "Freelance designers who invoice monthly" gets you sharper criticism than "small businesses". If the page is already live, add your conversion rate and where the traffic comes from.
Claude is reading words, not looking at your design, so it won't notice that the button disappears on a phone. Treat the three hero rewrites as things to test against each other, not as the answer. A useful trick: run the prompt twice. The problems that show up at the top both times are the ones to fix first.
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